The name of my creature from space is Ben. Ben have four
arms and three legs, Also is 5 meters tall, he have the power to became
invisible, and he is fast as a car , the color of Ben's skin is red and yellow
and he comes from Saturn.
Lovely picture Tomás! There are some grammar problems: -he/she/it HAS, not "have". -to+infinitive --> "the power to becOme invisible", not became. -don't forget the subject in English sentences: "Also HE is", not "Also is" It's great that you used a simile to describe Ben! But remember the correct structure would be "he is as fast as a car". You haven't included an introduction. Mark: 8
Lovely picture Tomás!
ResponderEliminarThere are some grammar problems:
-he/she/it HAS, not "have".
-to+infinitive --> "the power to becOme invisible", not became.
-don't forget the subject in English sentences: "Also HE is", not "Also is"
It's great that you used a simile to describe Ben! But remember the correct structure would be "he is as fast as a car".
You haven't included an introduction.
Mark: 8